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Everywhere I go
Every single place
The troubles seem to grow
Every smiling face
Eventually frowns with woe

Why can't I do
Anything right
I just screw
Up everything despite
The happiness I try to spew

Is it me
Am I the source of this ache
Does the pain flow free
Is this what I make
People be?

Should I go away and hide
Never to see others
Or the outside
But would I stop another's
Pain and be the only one that ever cried

What is a life with no grey
When everyone is sad
I'd give it all away
It wouldn't be that bad
I would finally be able to say

I saved a life
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Shadrush Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Student Writer
Wonderful
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fallrose Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Beautiful! I loved it. It has a lot of meaning.
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you! :icongrin--plz:
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fallrose Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Your Welcome! :) :hug:
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DracusMagnus Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
very nice, deep with room for expansion
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you! :thanks:
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sleepy-kisses Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Enough though you feel like this, I bet you're wrong ♥ You're a wonderful person who can do plenty right. Such as this lovely poem for example :)
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconiloveyouplz: Thank you very much
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sleepy-kisses Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Of course :)
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sumersela Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nice poem, know the feeling all to well but you'll get there!

keep up the good work
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you, and I'll try :icongrin--plz:
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sumersela Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome :)
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ShiningKnight23 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is really good! I can sort of see it as a Hollywood Undead song(hopefully you know who that group is :) )
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you! And I do agree, they'd make a good song out of it
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hellfiredemonchild Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Artist
it should be a song!
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you! Very much~~~:heart:
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hellfiredemonchild Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Artist
hey, what can I say? I listen to alot of heavy metal!
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconbrofistplz: Nice
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hellfiredemonchild Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Artist
Thanx. my parents got me into it.
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
My mom actually doesn't know anything I listen too :XD:, but that's good!
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hellfiredemonchild Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Artist
hey, thats alright! if it wasn't for my dad, i probly would have never heard of kiss, ac/dc, ugly kid joe, or any of the other bands that were around when he was a kid like iron maiden. i even named a drawing after one of their songs!
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Awesome, you're quiet the artist!
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Eternal--Art Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Sounds like my life........ Beautiful piece!
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you! :)
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samiispecialz Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Sound like something I've been through^^'
Another amazing poem *applause*
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconbrohugplz: Thank you :bow:
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samiispecialz Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
Hah lol ur welcome^^*
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:iconbitter-sweet-tragedy:
Sounds like my life. It really speaks to me. And the Rhyming meter, I've never seen it before. Beautiful.
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much~:heart:
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:iconamillionmilesofbookz:
Your work is truly amazing. This piece shows that clearly. Keep up the good work and I will surely be waiting for your next upload! :hug:
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much! :iconspazhugplz:
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:iconamillionmilesofbookz:
No problem! (:
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WillowShades Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
This is beautiful! It's wonderful and just great!
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you! :thanks:
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Racsodon Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
This was beautiful. Way better than my own stuff :P
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Nah, your stuff is pretty amazing.
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Racsodon Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
hehe, thank you :)
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
No problem~:heart:
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Fred647 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Writer
Wow this is really good! I try to write happy poetry, but I find the sadness makes more emotion so I stick to that
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
I know right? Everyone is always like why you no write happy things? I'm just like happiness doesn't produce good things for me.
Anyways, sorry for my rant, thank you very much
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Fred647 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Writer
O'Course
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AgentOrange230 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is so deep and I love it! Really emotional stuff.
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much! :D
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Silver13riolu Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
... Woah... that's amazing... I can sort of understand it...
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you~:heart:
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