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Everywhere I go
Every single place
The troubles seem to grow
Every smiling face
Eventually frowns with woe

Why can't I do
Anything right
I just screw
Up everything despite
The happiness I try to spew

Is it me
Am I the source of this ache
Does the pain flow free
Is this what I make
People be?

Should I go away and hide
Never to see others
Or the outside
But would I stop another's
Pain and be the only one that ever cried

What is a life with no grey
When everyone is sad
I'd give it all away
It wouldn't be that bad
I would finally be able to say

I saved a life
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Shadrush Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Student Writer
Wonderful
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fallrose Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Beautiful! I loved it. It has a lot of meaning.
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you! :icongrin--plz:
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fallrose Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Your Welcome! :) :hug:
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DracusMagnus Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
very nice, deep with room for expansion
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you! :thanks:
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sleepy-kisses Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Enough though you feel like this, I bet you're wrong ♥ You're a wonderful person who can do plenty right. Such as this lovely poem for example :)
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconiloveyouplz: Thank you very much
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sleepy-kisses Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Of course :)
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sumersela Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nice poem, know the feeling all to well but you'll get there!

keep up the good work
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