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Mommy mommy
Look at me
See what all I can be
Mommy mommy
Aren't you wowed
What can I do to make you proud
Mommy mommy
Please get out of bed
I'm tired mistaking you to be dead
Mommy mommy
Please don't cry
You and step daddy don't have to say good bye
Mommy mommy
Did I do good
I did the best that I could
Mommy mommy
I didn't mean to make you part
And make step daddy break your heart
Momma momma
No need for shame
I will take all the blame
Momma Momma
Please don't date
It really is something that I hate
Momma Momma
Don't leave me again
Can't you see I'm in so much pain
Momma Momma
Please come back
Your heart has turned black
Momma Momma
I don't want to watch the young one
Can't the dates be completely over and done
Momma Momma
Are you even my mom anymore
Because you just seem like an uncaring whore

Mom
I hope you're happy
Because you've lost me
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:iconcreepypastagal:
CreepypastaGal Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014   Writer
Wow. Such a way with words~! I kid you not I cried reading this :heart:
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hsybbed Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you so much, sorry for the late reply!
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KueVanila Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013
i don't know what i have to say...
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:iconmoonshadow909:
moonshadow909 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
I suppose I can in a way, relate to this...
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconihugyouplz: Hope things get better
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:iconmoonshadow909:
moonshadow909 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
:)
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ca12ro34lyn Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i want my mum to get married to my nearly step dad :happybounce: but i hope that dosnt happen to my mum :(
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Student General Artist
My best wishes to you! :heart:
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:iconvaunu:
vaunu Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013

    Really close to home, well done.
    :salute:
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you! Sorry for the late reply. :thanks:
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:iconpit-princess:
Pit-Princess Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Student Writer
Story of my life.
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:iconfb-phe13:
Fb-PHE13 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazingly written.
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you :thanks:
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:iconfb-phe13:
Fb-PHE13 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome! :)
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starfire437 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
I think this poem is about a child and his/her mother got divorced, she became depressed and ignored her child, and s/he (the child) grew to hate his/her mother.
Awesome poem, very well written.
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you :heart:
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FoxyFauna Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I'm not on very good terms with my family either. My parents haven't split or anything but... I'm probably the least favorite child.
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm sorry to hear that, thank you.
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yamixyugi-yaoi-lover Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can relate to this so much that it's sad.
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconbrohugplz: Thank you
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:iconyamixyugi-yaoi-lover:
yamixyugi-yaoi-lover Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*Hugs you back*
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Any-lee Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This almost made me cry. I can see a little child in the start, whom has got a happy family and everything works out. Then i see him grow up, learning to hate his mom. Its just so touching. You will be an awesome poet someday :3
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you very very much!!
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:iconblackbirdsshadow:
Blackbirdsshadow Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing :clapplz:
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you :icongrin--plz:
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TheEvilAngel724 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
beautiful
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you :thanks:
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:icontheevilangel724:
TheEvilAngel724 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no pronlem
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cantertrotwalk Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Beautiful poem...Almost made me cry. I can relate to this in some ways but with my dad :/
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you :iconspazhugplz:
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MusicMauMau Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
At first reading it, I wasn't sure what I thought, especially of how drastic it became at the end, and so quickly. But after thinking about it for a while, I like it hat way. I think it adds more power and emotion. Great piece. :)
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much :iconarigatouplz:
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:iconclarissabelle:
clarissabelle Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Excellently written. I can relate.
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you :iconbrohugplz:
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:iconclarissabelle:
clarissabelle Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I feel so loved now. Not creeped out at aaaalll. :)
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconsuspiciousplz: Not sure is that is sarcasm or not...
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:iconclarissabelle:
clarissabelle Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nah I was joking. I keep forgetting people can't hear my voice over the Internet. *facepalm* I'm such a retard.
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
:XD: I do that all the time :iconpatpatplz: You're not a retard
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:iconclarissabelle:
clarissabelle Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol.
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Dezaruthebeast Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is a beautiful poem its amazing and made me come very close to tears, this is one of the greatest poems I have ever read, thank you for writing it.
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it~:heart:
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budha-kitteh Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Photographer
sounds like the story of my life. hiving been there done that i offer you my condolences.
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you kindly~:heart:
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:iconbudha-kitteh:
budha-kitteh Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Photographer
welcome <3
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sleepy-kisses Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like way it goes from "Mommy" to just "Mom". It shows how the your feelings changed over time, I really like how you used that.
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you!~:heart:
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YoshiofRedemption Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Powerful stuff, man
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you :thanks:
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