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I rip out my vocal cords
One at a time
With no disregard towards
The blood and gore I'm

Getting on my rotting palms
No one cares anyways
They wouldn't care if I was dropping bombs
They're too wrapped up in their own days

Why make myself mute
Now they can't hear me complain
About my oh so very cute
And insignificant  pain

Now they won't need
To suffer anymore
They will be freed
From me, only a constant sore
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s84s Featured By Owner May 2, 2013
Liquid pride my friend. Liquid Pride.
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Thorns-And-Roses Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013   General Artist
Beautiful work. So sad, and yet so true and dark...
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you very much~:heart:
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xxRui-Kagenexx Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is exactly what I've wanted to say for years!
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you :D
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xxRui-Kagenexx Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
no problem! You're amazing ^^
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A-shatered-heart Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can relate to this...I don't know why I even try to talk..
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconspazhugplz: Thank you
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A-shatered-heart Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I mean it! You do amazing on all of your work
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconohstopityouplz:
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A-shatered-heart Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol
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sleepy-kisses Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The first two lines remind of me of Amano Tsukiko's "Koe" song. Part of the lyrics are "If, for example, these words reach you / You can rip out my vocal cords and throw them away"
Lovely poem :) It conveys its emotions quite well ♥
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you~:heart:
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LonelyZoner Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I definitely know how you feel. Sometimes you try and talk about something that's heavy on your mind and means a lot to you, but to others it's just stupid crap that your dumping on them. :hmm: But I'm glad you could get some of it out in your poetry. =) They're wonderful.
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconawwwplz: Thank you very much :icondragonhugplz:
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samiispecialz Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
awah! i can so relate to this...
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconspazhugplz:
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samiispecialz Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
Haha where do u get these little emoticons from^^'they're so cute*
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student General Artist
[link] Here are a lot I use, if you click on the maker of the journal you'll find more :meow:
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samiispecialz Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Awah!* thanks a lot
But he link didn't work for me x'C
But it's ok*
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student General Artist
:XD: Oh sorry, well if you go to my favorites and then helpers all the way at the bottom that is where they are
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samiispecialz Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
Ooooooh^^' thanks again xD
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LeAnnExplosiveART Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
here once again feeling
lost in my own pain
feeling forgotten

so i spew words of sorrow
from my cold lips
wishing they never left
upon my heart

sealing my lips
with needle and thread
ignoring the pain that
seeps in my heart

all i want is
no one hurt <3
..............................
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Such poet yourself!
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LeAnnExplosiveART Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe your better ~<3 i was a poet :3
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh thank you :iconchuuplz:
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LeAnnExplosiveART Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem ^.^
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NayaSelenia Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:tighthug:
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
:icondragonhug:
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NayaSelenia Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nice try :D
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Professional Writer
Heartfelt :wow:
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you!~:heart:
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DragonsChest Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Professional Writer
:iconfur12::iconwelcome1plz::iconwelcome2plz::iconwelcome3plz::iconwelcome4plz:
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Neko-Chan199 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I care!!!:icon0inuhappycryplz:
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconchuuplz: Thank you~:heart:
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Neko-Chan199 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome!:D
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cheshirecastiel Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
-_- :iconawwwplz: :iconletmehugyouplz: You has me! :iconrubcheeksplz: Even if I'm in a :iconbloodyrlyplz: mood.
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
:icondragonglomp: Thank you
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yourroyalshortness Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
In the words of Bruce Almighty: B.E.A.Utiful
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconpelvicthrustplz::XD: He is the only reason I know how to spell beautiful
And thank you :heart:
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yourroyalshortness Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are very welcome :D
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limeheer Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
even the worst of voices is needed to complete the sound of a choir
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Indeed, thank you :iconarigatouplz:
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limeheer Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
and to the quote in your signature i have only to say: that's why we HAVE to work together
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconwiseplz: Agreed
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limeheer Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
ahh Eisenstein the one that asked "is it me that is crazy? or is it them?"
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student General Artist
“Everybody is a genius. But if you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will live its whole life believing that it is stupid.” That is my favorite quote by him
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limeheer Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
my fav fact that eistian and Hitler is prof of is that the differences betwin a genius and a sociopaths i measured in the success rate
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student General Artist
That one sure is very interesting, I must say.
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xXEm-033Xx Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
oh my gawsh !! :omfg:
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