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Words float on a thin line
Some scurry through
My cloudy mind
Never to be caught only
Leaving their essence behind
Give me writings to where
People can sometimes find
What I mean

No matter what I do
I can never seem to convey
The emotion of my poem to
A person despite who they are
I even doubt you
Will get just what I mean
When I finish a poem I rue
Make the stupid poem

My own words
Are twisting and forming
Into a poem I didn't make
Sometimes I feel like crying
The frustration is so great
I keep writing
Otherwise I'll always
Be just scribbling
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:iconcopperfrost:
Copperfrost Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
I know the feeling because this morning around four I had a really good idea but I was too tired to write it down and now I can't remember it :iconwhatdoesitmeanplz:
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconsadsighplz: I hate when that happens.
:icony-u-noplz: brain why you no remember?
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:iconcopperfrost:
Copperfrost Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Because our brains love to hate us :iconmingplz:
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Why brains... why... :iconlazycryplz:
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:iconcopperfrost:
Copperfrost Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconshrugsplz:
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Evil brains
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DracusMagnus Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
to start with a word that turns into a phrase which turn into a sonnet or poem or song or even an odyssey. if you wanna scribble, scribble. if you wanna write, write. be not so concerned with preciseness, just start to bleed onto the page, it will do the work if you let it. read it when your done and edit as little as possible. its about soul, not perfection. For is not the soul, made by the Master....perfect.
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student General Artist
That is all very true, but sometimes I can't get my soul to flow.
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:icondracusmagnus:
DracusMagnus Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah I can understand that, I hate it when that happens. I dig the way you write tho. Thank you for the adds. Have you had a chance to check out any of my other devs?
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you and I haven't, sorry ^^;
Been doing a lot of last minute shopping and such so I do apologize
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DracusMagnus Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Worry not I completely understand
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samiispecialz Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
and the meaning to all of them are understandable!
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samiispecialz Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
dude... you are not scribbling your making complete sense so stop beating yourself up xO
you're poems are awesome!
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student General Artist
:XD: Thank you so much!~:heart: Sometimes it is just a lil rough
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samiispecialz Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
Yeah i know what u mean
I write my own poems too
And im thinking of putting them up
But im not so.sure^^'
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student General Artist
I'd love to read them :icondragontailfast:
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samiispecialz Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Oops... I gave the reply for this on another one of your comments^^' hehe my bad
//it's confusing really^^'//
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:iconsparia:
Sparia Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student General Artist
thats part of the writers....Hell :D
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student General Artist
I know! Sucks sometimes.
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:iconsparia:
Sparia Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student General Artist
indeed...
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GABanks118 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student Writer
I generally try to avoid planning out my work beforehand so as to avoid this, except sometimes I STILL end up dealing with the death of a character that I thought was going to survive.
That said, this is very well written, and it reminds of a piece by Larry Levine.
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much :)
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:iconatlantianmpl:
AtlantianMPL Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012   Writer
You know, im not a poet, but I can tell you
that happens all the time with my writing
I hate how I keep having to rewrite or find new inspiration for the same piece
well, I like this alot so heres a :+fav:
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you!
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:iconatlantianmpl:
AtlantianMPL Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012   Writer
no problem
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FallenDarkElegance22 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
I get that sometimes, just the writing and scribbling out part....it's because admittedly I want to be a REAL good writer someday like some people on here! :D
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student General Artist
You can do it! :icongreatjobplz:
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