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Words float on a thin line
Some scurry through
My cloudy mind
Never to be caught only
Leaving their essence behind
Give me writings to where
People can sometimes find
What I mean

No matter what I do
I can never seem to convey
The emotion of my poem to
A person despite who they are
I even doubt you
Will get just what I mean
When I finish a poem I rue
Make the stupid poem

My own words
Are twisting and forming
Into a poem I didn't make
Sometimes I feel like crying
The frustration is so great
I keep writing
Otherwise I'll always
Be just scribbling
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Copperfrost Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
I know the feeling because this morning around four I had a really good idea but I was too tired to write it down and now I can't remember it :iconwhatdoesitmeanplz:
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconsadsighplz: I hate when that happens.
:icony-u-noplz: brain why you no remember?
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:iconcopperfrost:
Copperfrost Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Because our brains love to hate us :iconmingplz:
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Why brains... why... :iconlazycryplz:
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Copperfrost Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconshrugsplz:
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Evil brains
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DracusMagnus Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
to start with a word that turns into a phrase which turn into a sonnet or poem or song or even an odyssey. if you wanna scribble, scribble. if you wanna write, write. be not so concerned with preciseness, just start to bleed onto the page, it will do the work if you let it. read it when your done and edit as little as possible. its about soul, not perfection. For is not the soul, made by the Master....perfect.
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student General Artist
That is all very true, but sometimes I can't get my soul to flow.
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DracusMagnus Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah I can understand that, I hate it when that happens. I dig the way you write tho. Thank you for the adds. Have you had a chance to check out any of my other devs?
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you and I haven't, sorry ^^;
Been doing a lot of last minute shopping and such so I do apologize
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