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Her outbursts of deafening laughter
Bounced and hurled around
Her 'special' white room
As she rocked back and forth
Hitting the soft pillow like walls
Making the sleeves of her too tight jacket
Move with a similar rhythmic motion
But what stood out the most were her eyes
Even though they sometimes were hidden
By her untamed mass of dirt brown hair
Her bright midnight blue eyes shine brightly
She did not see the white room
Nor did she feel the suffocating pressure of the room
Instead she saw and felt a soft field of green grass
And a little black kitten with amber eyes
That would bat at a delicate butterfly
That carried the starry sky upon its blue wings
She felt the cool spring breeze and gazed
At the quickly fading sunset
That sprouted colors you could never captured
Even she, herself knew that she was crazy
But she no longer cared
She no longer wished to try and grasp
The flimsy string that connected people to reality
And all that came with it
Despite that she was crazy
And no one would ever believe her
When she tried to tell people
About the magnificent wonder she had found
She was finally, after all the pain
All of the struggle, all the constant hurt
And all the loss, she was finally at peace
She was absolutely insane  
But she was finally free
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:iconclarissabelle:
clarissabelle Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My best friend and I have pondered insanity a lot, and we have come to the conclusion that it is legit better than sanity.
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s84s Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
I totally agree. Me and my friends did the same!!!
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clarissabelle Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol!! That's crazy!! Haha, see what I did there? ; )
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s84s Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
i totally see what you did there.... We decided that if there would be an insane apocalypse, we would be the ones to start it... Wanna join??
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clarissabelle Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Definitely.
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s84s Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
Welcome to the group of insanitah!!
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:iconclarissabelle:
clarissabelle Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hehehe, this shall be fun.
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s84s Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
IM GOING INSANE AND MY CAPS LOCK IS BROKEN...

HELP MEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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s84s Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *choke choke cough cough*
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s84s Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *choke choke cough cough*
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
:icontruestoryplz:
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:iconclarissabelle:
clarissabelle Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Still watching Barney and friends I see. ;)
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh of course :iconlikeasirplz:
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Copperfrost Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Wow. I have to say, this is one of my favorite pieces of yours. The way it flows and the word choice fit nicely together ^^
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconohstopityouplz: Thank you
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stealthyninja21 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
i have an aunt that i really love going through a mental disorder and i hope she is okay and this makes me feel a little more sure that she will be okay. so, thank you :)
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome, and thank you. I give your aunt my best of wishes. :)
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Mika-Ryoko Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012   Writer
I love the line about the buttefly thatcarries the stars :-)
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you!
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Mika-Ryoko Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012   Writer
No problem and thank you for the watch!
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KodokuNoNana Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012   General Artist
Wonderful job!

Keep going!
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you, I'll do my best!
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LadyZaeofMelancholy Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your work is lovely...
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you!
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:iconladyzaeofmelancholy:
LadyZaeofMelancholy Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome
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LadyZaeofMelancholy Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Its better to be free than to be trapped in reality c;
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconfeellikeasirplz::iconsaysplz:Tis true
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TheArtymiss Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yes.
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chewyraezen Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this was a good piece. i enjoyed reading it and being in the mind of the insane, it seems so nice there.
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you very much!~:heart:
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krazykez Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012   General Artist
Nicely written, kiddo - you've done a great job with this one...;)
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you! :iconnomglompplz:
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:iconkrazykez:
krazykez Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012   General Artist
No probs - You earned it! :clap:
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconletmehugyouplz:
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:iconkrazykez:
krazykez Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012   General Artist
*Hugs* :tighthug:
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconsupertighthugplz:
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krazykez Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012   General Artist
:iconembarrasedplz::iconsaysplz:D'aaaaaw, shucks! Thanks kiddo...:)
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconshaplz::iconsaysplz:It was nuthin'
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winterkate Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Writer
Interesting concept and execution. I do believe that 'outbursts' is one word, though.
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you and I'll fix that, thank you for the help
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winterkate Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Writer
Hey, you're welcome! Thanks for taking it so well :)
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank YOU for being nice about it!
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winterkate Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Student Writer
Hey, you're really welcome! Thanks!
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Student General Artist
No problem! :iconimhappyplz:
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Writer
It's beautiful and just wonderful and makes me sort of jealous of insanity =)
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Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Thank you ;)
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:iconcontradictory55:
Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student Writer
=D You're welcome.
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LillyHope Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
:iconepicclapplz: I. Love it!
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:iconout-of-earths-reach:
Out-Of-Earths-Reach Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm glad you do!~:heart:
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LillyHope Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012
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